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How to Describe a Beautiful Woman in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a beautiful woman in a story

Is a female character in your book particularly good-looking? Do you need some tips to help you write this person? Check out the post on how to describe a beautiful woman in a story!

 

1. Alluring

Definition

Something or someone very attractive.

Examples

โ€œThe beautiful woman was alluring. Everywhere she went, eyes followed.โ€

โ€œHe watched the alluring woman as she walked through the room. Her beauty was hard to ignore.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œAlluringโ€ emphasizes the extent of your fictional womanโ€™s beauty and implies that other characters are fascinated by it. You can use โ€œalluringโ€ to show how her beauty catches peopleโ€™s attention, and the woman could use this to her advantage. If another character describes her beauty as โ€œalluring,โ€ it could hint that they want to get to know her more or find her very attractive.

 

2. Stunning

Definition

Somebody extremely impressive or beautiful.

Examples

โ€œThe woman was simply stunning. No one could deny her features were carved by angels.โ€

โ€œThe stunning woman always received invitations from model scouts, but she wasnโ€™t interested in that career.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œStunningโ€ is another great way to elevate your womanโ€™s beauty. However, this word shows her beauty is universally agreed upon and not linked to being attracted to her. Other characters may be jealous of her โ€œstunningโ€ looks, as these could grant her special opportunities and better treatment from others.

 

3. Arrogant

Definition

Someone who believes theyโ€™re more important than others and behaves in an unpleasant way.

Examples

โ€œThe beautiful woman was nice to look at, but she was too arrogant to talk to. No wonder she had no friends.โ€

โ€œThe arrogant woman used her beauty to get what she wanted. However, many of her peers saw through this act.โ€

How it Adds Description

Sometimes, a character with beautiful looks is aware of it and uses it to their advantage, thus making them โ€œarrogant.โ€ If your woman is โ€œarrogant,โ€ she likely has few friends and annoys other people very quickly. Other characters might avoid the โ€œarrogantโ€ woman altogether.

 

4. Compassionate

Definition

Someone who shows understanding and sympathy for others.

Examples

โ€œThe beautiful woman was compassionate, and this surprised many. It upset her that people assumed she was conceited.โ€

โ€œThe compassionate woman always cared for animals and children. Underneath her beauty was a heart of gold.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to give more insight into your beautiful womanโ€™s personality, โ€œcompassionateโ€ can show theyโ€™re a kind person. Some characters might be shocked to hear sheโ€™s โ€œcompassionate,โ€ as often people assume attractive people are stuck-up.

 

5. Flawless

Definition

Someone that has no faults and is extremely good.

Examples

โ€œThe team was stumped by the beautiful woman. She was absolutely flawless.โ€

โ€œSheโ€™d never seen such a flawless woman. Until this point, she believed such beauty only existed on TV.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œFlawlessโ€ is an excellent way to reinforce the perfection of your womanโ€™s beauty. Other characters may find her โ€œflawlessโ€ beauty amazing, and this could attract lots of attention to her. Alternatively, some characters may be jealous of her looks and act out towards her.

 

6. Confident

Definition

Someone who is sure of their own ideas, qualities, and ideas.

Examples

โ€œThe beautiful woman was confident, no doubt about it. You could tell she knew her effect on others as she walked through the door.โ€

โ€œHe glanced across the platform and saw a beautiful woman. She was confident and waved back at him.โ€

How it Adds Description

If your character is bold or self-assured, โ€œconfidenceโ€ is an apt word to describe them. Her โ€œconfidenceโ€ could make her a friendly character, as sheโ€™s not scared to talk to new people. This could make her a great leader, and other characters could look up to her for advice or guidance.

 

7. Captivating

Definition

Someone or something that attracts or fascinates others.

Examples

โ€œHe lay in bed thinking about the captivating woman. Her beauty was driving him crazy, and he needed to see her again.โ€

โ€œThe captivating woman found her beauty frustrating. She just wanted to blend in, but she couldnโ€™t help but draw attention from others.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œCaptivatingโ€ shows the effect of the fictional womanโ€™s beauty on others. This means her good looks are unforgettable, and many find them difficult to ignore. She could either love this attention or find it extremely troubling. Other characters may even start stalking her, as her โ€œcaptivatingโ€ looks are hard to ignore.

 

8. Extraordinary

Definition

Something or somebody with extremely special qualities or looks.

Examples

โ€œShe knew she looked extraordinary, and she basked in the attention. Usually, it made her uncomfortable, but tonight sheโ€™d embrace it.โ€

โ€œThe extraordinary woman appeared in her dreams again. Her beauty was unbelievable.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œExtraordinaryโ€ implies that the womanโ€™s beauty is extremely good, which might often make her the most beautiful woman in the room. Other characters may find this intriguing, and it might make her more memorable to others.

 

9. Humble

Definition

Someone who isnโ€™t proud and doesnโ€™t believe theyโ€™re better than others.

Examples

โ€œThe humble woman quietly ate her lunch. She didnโ€™t notice everyone else in the room staring at her beauty.โ€

โ€œEvery time someone complimented her on her beauty, she blushed. In that respect, she was a humble person.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to show that your beautiful woman doesnโ€™t believe sheโ€™s better than others, โ€œhumbleโ€ is a great word to use. This implies her personality is not affected by her attractiveness, and it might make her popular with others, too. If another describes her as โ€œhumble,โ€ they might be impressed with her normal attitude.

 

10. Conventional

Definition

Someone whose opinions and behavior are normal and ordinary.

Examples

โ€œHer beauty didnโ€™t affect her politics. She was as conventional as can be.โ€

โ€œEveryone was surprised at how conventional she was. Theyโ€™d been blindsided by her impossible beauty, and many were disappointed after meeting her.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œConventionalโ€ shows that your beautiful woman doesnโ€™t have any radical ideas or behaviors. Other characters might find this disappointing, as they may expect her personality to be unique, like her looks. Being โ€œconventionalโ€ could also help the beautiful woman avoid conflicts, as she doesnโ€™t take a polarizing stance.

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