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How to Describe a Smile in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a smile in a story

The focus of this post is on how to describe a smile in a story. Scroll down to get ideas on how the following 10 words can be used to describe smiles on the characters in your novel.

 

1. Creepy

Definition

Something that leaves you feeling frightened or nervous.

Examples

โ€œThe unknown man removed his mask to show the audience a creepy smile.โ€

โ€œEllie always thought clowns had creepy smiles, and whenever she saw one, she had to avert her eyes.โ€

How it Adds Description

Though smiles are usually a positive thing, sometimes they can be slightly scary and make you feel afraid, and thus you can call them โ€œcreepy.โ€ A character with a โ€œcreepyโ€ smile might make others feel uneasy, and itโ€™s a trait thatโ€™s often associated with villains or antagonists.

 

2. Toothy

Definition

A smile that shows a lot of teeth.

Examples

โ€œWhen Bennyโ€™s front teeth finally grew in, he never stopped smiling. To his parentโ€™s joy, he had a toothy smile 24/7.โ€

โ€œAmanda knew her toothy smile wasnโ€™t the most beautiful, but it didnโ€™t bother her.โ€

How it Adds Description

You can use โ€œtoothyโ€ to describe a smile where the characterโ€™s teeth are very visible. This could be because their teeth are larger or stick out, or it could simply describe an extra wide smile where more teeth are on show. Some characters might be insecure about their โ€œtoothyโ€ smile, especially if others comment on it.

 

3. Huge

Definition

Something very large in size.

Examples

โ€œThe elephantโ€™s huge smile surprised the zoo visitors. No one realized the gentle giants were capable of showing such human emotion.โ€

โ€œGirls, remember to show the school photographer a huge smile! We donโ€™t want frowning in photos like last year.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œHugeโ€ can be used to show that the character has a big smile on their face. A โ€œhugeโ€ smile can show theyโ€™re extremely happy or excited. It can also be used to show they have a larger mouth, and thus, the โ€œhugeโ€ smile is a direct description of their facial feature.

 

4. Menacing

Definition

Someone who looks dangerous or frightening.

Examples

โ€œThe robber had a menacing smile on his face as he stole the money.โ€

โ€œTimothy couldnโ€™t sleep for days after seeing the murdererโ€™s menacing smile.โ€

How it Adds Description

If a smile is โ€œmenacing,โ€ it will likely make other characters feel scared or anxious. This is because it implies that the smiling character might be dangerous or do something to cause harm. A character with a โ€œmenacingโ€ smile is more likely to be a villain or a nasty character.

 

5. Stunning

Definition

Something thatโ€™s impressive or beautiful.

Examples

โ€œThe queenโ€™s stunning smile always delighted her people.โ€

โ€œAs the models practiced their stunning smiles in the mirror, the photographer started to set up his camera.โ€

How it Adds Description

You can use โ€œstunningโ€ to describe a particularly beautiful smile. If a character has a โ€œstunningโ€ smile, it might frequently catch other peopleโ€™s attention, and theyโ€™re likely to be considered good-looking. This could consequently make them a popular character.

 

6. Radiant

Definition

Something that glows or shines brightly.

Examples

โ€œBelleโ€™s radiant smile always lit up the room.โ€

โ€œAndrew always spent ten minutes brushing his teeth every morning. He wanted to ensure his smile was as radiant as possible.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œRadiantโ€ implies that the characterโ€™s smile is very bright and attractive, which can further imply that they take good care of their teeth and are in good health. Characters with a โ€œradiantโ€ smile might take great care of their appearance, and this might mean that theyโ€™re more high-maintenance than others.

 

7. Fake

Definition

Something thatโ€™s not genuine or deceives people.

Examples

โ€œFern shot her younger brother a fake smile to appease her mother.โ€

โ€œThe school yearbook was full of fake smiles and teenage acne.โ€

How it Adds Description

Not all smiles show genuine happiness, and you can convey a deceiving smile through the adjective โ€œfake.โ€ This shows that the smiling characterโ€™s intentions donโ€™t match their cheery expression. Characters who use โ€œfakeโ€ smiles might resist showing their genuine emotions, making them quite manipulative. Perceptive characters will notice if a character is โ€œfakeโ€ smiling.

 

8. Subtle

Definition

Something not noticeable or obvious.

Examples

โ€œWhen her boss turned away, Jenny subtly smiled. She didnโ€™t want to be caught laughing at the teamโ€™s misfortune.โ€

โ€œFrederick had a subtle smile on his face when his A+ grades were read out in class.โ€

How it Adds Description

A โ€œsubtleโ€ smile is a low-key smile that no one notices or is meant to be hidden from others. This could be because the character might get in trouble for laughing or smiling, or it could be them trying to keep their emotions hidden from others. In contrast, a โ€œsubtleโ€ smile could also indicate that the character is happy but not overjoyed, as they arenโ€™t offering a full smile.

 

9. Ecstatic

Definition

To be very excited or extremely happy.

Examples

โ€œThe man had an ecstatic smile on his face when his lottery numbers were read out.โ€

โ€œClementine couldnโ€™t wipe the ecstatic smile off her face once she realized sheโ€™d gotten into university.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to show a character is overjoyed, enthusiastic, or extremely happy, an โ€œecstaticโ€ smile can indicate these emotions. When a character has an โ€œecstaticโ€ smile, theyโ€™re likely feeling a rush of positive emotions, and they might be unable to hide them. Sometimes, an โ€œecstaticโ€ smile can be infectious, and therefore, other characters will also feel overjoyed.

 

10. Tearful

Definition

When someoneโ€™s voice or face shows that theyโ€™re about to cry or have cried.

Examples

โ€œPatrick had a tearful smile on his face as he waved goodbye to his father. It was a bittersweet moment.โ€

โ€œHannah saw her motherโ€™s tearful smile as she walked across the graduation stage. It made the moment even more special.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œTearfulโ€ shows that the characterโ€™s smile is combined with tears or that theyโ€™re about to cry. This can be due to both happiness or sadness, and therefore, you can use โ€œtearfulโ€ to describe smiles in positive and negative moments. If a character has a โ€œtearfulโ€ smile, they might be more at peace with showing their emotions than more reserved characters.

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