This post was originally published at Novelicious.com and is now at WritingTipsOasis.com. WritingTipsOasis.com acquired Novelicious.com in June 2022.
Ashley Hay is the author of The Railway Man’s Wife, a novel set just after the end of the Second World War in coastal New South Wales that focuses on three people trying to rebuild their lives. Her book is out in January and will be reviewed here soon, but today she’s answering a few questions for our Novelicious readers.
Can you tell us a little about your average writing day?
For the past four years Iโve only had two or three days a week to write โ I have a little boy who was born while I was working on The Railwaymanโs Wife and is now five. These days, he heads off to daycare for lovely long eight-hour stretches, and my plan has been to sit down as soon as he sets off and write until he gets home again with his dad at the other end of the day. Iโve managed to keep up with all the writing Iโve wanted to do in this part of a week โ in terms of fiction, and journalism. But in February, he starts school, and the whole shape of my writing day will change โ short days, but five of them a week. Iโm looking forward to seeing how that changes what I do.
Iโm pretty pragmatic about getting on with writing: one of the great things about training and working as a journalist is that you treat writing as a job that you sit down and do, rather than something that waits for particular conditions or inspirations.
When you are writing, do you use any celebrities or people you know as inspiration?
Do you mean for characters? Iโm a terrible bowerbird and I steal bits and pieces of all sorts of places and people and moments and circumstances โฆ and hopefully combine them into some new whole thing so that nobody notices themselves and objects. I did borrow the idea of the accident that happens in The Railwaymanโs Wife โ the death of a railwayman โ and the job his wife is subsequently offered in compensation from my own familyโs history. But the characters and circumstances in the novel are all the stuff of imagination.
I donโt think Iโve ever borrowed a celebrity for a story, although the English novelist D. H. Lawrence made a very shadowy appearance in The Railwaymanโs Wife and I imagined a version of an actual British Navy astronomer, Lt William Dawes, in my first novel, The Body in the Clouds. Actually, the central incident in The Body in the Clouds was a man falling from the Sydney Harbour Bridge while it was being constructed, and surviving. Now, this is a true story โ a worker called Vincent Kelly fell from the bridge in late October 1930 โ and I kept the name and the date of the accident in the novel. I didnโt really use Kelly as a character; he only had a walk-on (or fall-off) role. But when I was talking about the book at the Sydney Writersโ Festival, a lady stood up in the audience and said that she was Kellyโs niece โฆ I think it was the first time Iโd really confronted the idea that Kelly had been a real person rather than just a plot point for a story I wanted to tell. Fortunately she said that the family had really loved the book, and my heart slid out of my throat and back into my chest.What is your favourite Womenโs Fiction book of all time and why?
Thatโs such a huge question โ I donโt think Iโve ever chosen a book specifically as โwomenโs fictionโ although as a writer whoโs sometimes mistaken as a man (itโs my name), Iโm interested in whether you can read something and genuinely not know if the author is male or female.
Iโm a simultaneously fickle and greedy reader, and I tend to love whatever Iโm reading at the moment โ and hope that my favourite book is going to be the one I open next! If I had to narrow it down, in terms of โwomenโ, Iโd nominate Jeanette Wintersonโs The Passion for all of its lyricism and its impossible possibilities. I re-read it on the pretext of answering this Q&A and loved it all over again. Anything written by Alice Munro, as well: you carry her women with you forever.
What is your writing process? Do you plan first or dive in? How many drafts do you do?
It depends on the book โ I wrote an awful lot of drafts of The Body in the Clouds before I found its rhythm and its structure. I wrote The Railwaymanโs Wife from start to finish as a pretty linear single-character narrative โ and then went back and interrupted it with flashbacks and other charactersโ perspectives.
The new novel Iโm working on I conceived originally as a suite of short stories โ this was the first project Iโd started afresh after having my son, and I was conscious of possibly having to enable myself to work in a more fractured way. Iโm working on the second draft of it now, and I wonder if itโs actually a much more cohesive thing rather than the independent pieces I first imagined. The novel that I hope will come next has a first and last scene at the moment โ in my mind, and on bits of notebooks โ and I have all the limitless possibilities of blank space in between with which to connect them. Iโm not sure yet whether itโs a thing Iโll map out or a thing Iโll discover by writing it.What was your journey to being a published author?
When I was finishing school I secretly wanted to be a writer but I wasnโt sure how you went about being one. I did a journalism degree because I thought if I could get a job as a journalist, I might be able to work out if I could do the other sort of writing after that. I was very fortunate in the editors and mentors I encountered in my first years as a journo โ they let me play with long-form journalism and sent me from there along the path to narrative non-fiction, which led me to my first book, The Secret: The Strange Marriage of Annabella Milbanke and Lord Byron, published in 2000.
What do you think is the biggest myth about being a novelist?
That we stay in our pyjamas all day every day because we work from home. Really, itโs only once in a blue moon โฆ
What advice can you give to our readers who want to write a novel of their own?
Try! There are dozens of quotes from authors along the lines of โthe only way to be a better writer is to writeโ, which is true, but itโs even simpler than that. The only way to be a writer at all is to write โ every day if you can, and not just to publish. Writing is a craft that does get better the more you do it, just like any other: youโd never trust a plumber who hadnโt spent time learning to weld pipes before they visited your house. Also try to read as much as possible, and as widely as possible. And look for people whoโll read what you write and help you to see how to make it better. Theyโre worth their weight in gold.
What are you working on at the moment?
Iโm working on the second draft of a new novel thatโs called, at the moment, Three People are Reading This Now. Itโs set in Brisbane and spans two sets of lives โ in the 1960s and now โ in the same part of the city. Iโm also thrilled to have just been asked to edit next yearโs Best Australian Science Writing anthology, which will deliver a whole stack of new and exciting reading to me.
Thanks, Ashley!
