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How to Describe a Baby in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a baby in story

Do young children feature heavily in your novel? Would some ideas on how to describe a baby in a story help you? Check out the words and examples weโ€™ve included below.

 

1. Delightful

Definition

Something or someone very pleasant to be around.

Examples

โ€œShe peered down at the delightful baby and shed a tear; he was everything sheโ€™d ever dreamed of and more.โ€

โ€œThere was never a more delightful baby than her son, and she knew it.โ€

How it Adds Description

Babies are often associated with pure joy and goodness. If you want to emphasize how perfect your fictional babe is, the word โ€œdelightfulโ€ will convey your babyโ€™s pleasant nature to the reader. The word โ€œdelightfulโ€ can also show the love and admiration other characters have for the baby โ€” especially when used in their internal monologue.

 

2. Bonny

Definition

Something or someone nice to look at.

Examples

โ€œShe was a bonny baby, and the bright bow on her head cemented the fact.โ€

โ€œThe nursery was jam-packed with bonny babies, and she wished she could take a peek at their cuteness.โ€

How it Adds Description

Babies are well-known to be cute, and โ€œbonnyโ€ is an adjective that highlights their innocence and cuteness. This word stems from Northern English and Scottish, but can be used for sweet babies in any context. โ€œBonnyโ€ can also reference a merry or happy personality, which can also apply to your fictional baby.

 

3. Fragile

Definition

Something or someone thatโ€™s weak and canโ€™t survive alone.

Examples

โ€œHe cradled the fragile baby, and he knew in his gut heโ€™d do anything to protect it.โ€

โ€œThough she was fed well, the fragile baby still looked so tiny compared to the others.โ€

How it Adds Description

Babies rely on adults to care for them, and without assistance theyโ€™re โ€œfragileโ€. This word highlights the vulnerability of babies, and it can be used to show just how small and young your fictional baby is. It can also highlight that theyโ€™re weaker than other babies, which foreshadows future issues or plot points.

 

4. Innocent

Definition

Someone of something with no knowledge or experience about the unpleasant or complex aspects of life.

Examples

โ€œThe innocent baby gurgled at his motherโ€™s breast; all he knew was love and his mother wished heโ€™d remain so pure.โ€

โ€œShe peeped at the innocent baby, and despite the troubles outside the sweet babe smiled up at her.โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œinnocentโ€ highlights how new babies are to the world. Theyโ€™ve no concept of evil and donโ€™t know the stresses of modern life. This adjective can be used to emphasize how sweet and pure your baby is, and it can contrast them in the future if they lose their innocence.

 

5. Petite

Definition

Someone small, dainty, or delicate.

Examples

โ€œThe petite baby made a lot of noise for someone so small.โ€

โ€œYou were a petite baby, and we often worried about losing you!โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to give your reader an image of how tiny your fictional baby is, the word โ€œpetiteโ€ can help. This adjective signifies that your character is smaller than usual, and you can use this imagery to build up a sense of fondness for them.

 

6. Restless

Definition

Someone whoโ€™s dissatisfied, bored, or impatient.

Examples

โ€œGosh, thatโ€™s a restless baby! Will he ever be quiet?โ€

โ€œHe wished the restless baby would sleep through the night, or at least for a solid hour!โ€

How it Adds Description

Babies are cute and positive beings, but they also have the tendency to cry out and fuss when hungry, tired, or agitated. The word โ€œrestlessโ€ builds a realistic image of a baby for your story, and this will help your readers understand the parentsโ€™ lives better. It can also evoke pity, as โ€œrestlessโ€ signals that the babyโ€™s parents may also be having a tough time.

 

7. Plump

Definition

Someone or something rounded or chubby.

Examples

โ€œHe cuddled the plump baby, and wished heโ€™d be able to cradle the child for the rest of his life.โ€

โ€œThe plump baby looked up at him and cooed, after minutes they were thick as thieves.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to provide a physical description of your baby, the word โ€œplumpโ€ is an appropriate word to use. This adjective signals that the baby is well fed, without negative connotations. โ€œPlumpโ€ frequently refers to babies that are of a healthy weight and those with rounded โ€˜baby facesโ€™, and it is a great way to show their cuteness to your audience.

 

8. Chirpy

Definition

Someone very lively, happy, or cheerful

Examples

โ€œNo one could deny that she was a chirpy baby, and her contagious laughter could be heard across the street.โ€

โ€œHe listened out for the chirpy baby, and his face lit up as soon as he heard the sweet babbling.โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œchirpyโ€ is a popular adjective used to describe happy children or babies in novels. This word is often associated with babies who make lots of laughter or noise โ€” ideal if youโ€™re portraying a happy childhood in your story. This can also help to make your reader sympathetic to the baby, as they have a sweet image of the infant in their minds as they read.

 

9. Precious

Definition

Something or someone thatโ€™s valuable or rare.

Examples

โ€œShe held the precious baby close to her. This was a moment sheโ€™d never forget.โ€

โ€œHe gazed into the crib, and the precious baby met his gaze with an equally curious look.โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œpreciousโ€ shows how special the baby in your story is. When used for humans/babies, โ€œpreciousโ€ doesnโ€™t denote monetary value. Rather, it implies how important the character is, and it can highlight how those around the baby care for it.

 

10. Giggly

Definition

Someone who laughs a lot in a childlike manner.

Examples

โ€œHe put the giggly baby to bed, but he knew it wouldnโ€™t sleep for hours to come.โ€

โ€œYou were a giggly baby; you found joy in almost everything and anything you saw!โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œgigglyโ€ shows that someone has a cheery disposition and is likely to start laughing a lot. This works well when describing babies, as babies often laugh at anything. The term can also show a characterโ€™s fondness for the baby when using it in their narrative, as โ€œgigglyโ€ is a positive term.

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