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How to Describe a Hangover in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a hangover in a story

Are you writing a chapter where a character wakes up after a heavy night of drinking? If some tips on how to describe a hangover in a story would be useful, read on to learn how you can use the following 10 words in your novel.

 

1. Deathly

Definition

Something that resembles death or a severe illness.

Examples

โ€œIโ€™m deathly hungover. I donโ€™t think Iโ€™m going to survive today.โ€

โ€œDonโ€™t disturb him! He got home at 6 am, and now heโ€™s deathly hungover.โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œdeathlyโ€ shows the extreme extent of the hangover, as it compares the post-drinking effects to a death-like state. This shows your reader the extent of the hangover, and it can also be used to show other charactersโ€™ shock. If a character uses โ€œdeathlyโ€ to describe their condition, it could also show that theyโ€™re more dramatic than others when it comes to describing how they feel.

 

2. Powerful

Definition

Something thatโ€™s extremely strong and hard to ignore.

Examples

โ€œThat looks like a powerful hangover. Iโ€™m glad I didnโ€™t drink last night.โ€

โ€œIโ€™ve never had such a powerful hangover. Iโ€™m never doing shots of tequila ever again!โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œPowerfulโ€ is an appropriate adjective to describe any strong hangover. This word showcases the characterโ€™s struggle to function after drinking, which can further add to their character development as your story progresses. You can also use โ€œpowerfulโ€ to evoke pity from the reader, as being hungover is unpleasant.

 

3. Revolting

Definition

Something thatโ€™s disgusting or horrible.

Examples

โ€œBeing hungover is revolting. I would never do that to myself!โ€

โ€œHe woke up and immediately ran for the bathroom. He had a revolting hangover, and no amount of coffee could cure it.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you wish to paint a negative picture of your characterโ€™s hangover, the word โ€œrevoltingโ€ is an apt adjective to use. This word shows how disgusting the hangover is, and itโ€™ll also show your characterโ€™s strong dislike for being hungover.

 

4. Offensive

Definition

Something that is upsetting or embarrassing.

Examples

โ€œHave you ever had an offensive hangover? I wouldnโ€™t wish it on anyone.โ€

โ€œNo wonder youโ€™re experiencing an offensive hangover. You finished a bottle of vodka on your own.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to add an element of humor to your hangover description, the word โ€œoffensiveโ€ can help. This word is usually linked to things that are rude or insulting, and when applied to a hangover, it shows that the character is feeling so unwell that theyโ€™re upset about it. โ€œOffensiveโ€ can also be used to show a non-hungover characterโ€™s negative feelings about the illness, which is appropriate for any characters who donโ€™t drink alcohol or find sickness upsetting.

 

5. Sickening

Definition

Something that provokes feelings of sickness, disgust, and horror.

Examples

โ€œShe looked at the band members. They were all suffering from sickening hangovers.โ€

โ€œNo matter how ill he felt, he was always glad he didnโ€™t have an additional sickening hangover.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œSickeningโ€ can be used to show a character’s hatred for hangovers. This adjective is linked to disgust, horror, and sickness. Therefore, if a character uses this term to describe a hangover, theyโ€™re physically and emotionally repulsed by the condition. This shows your audience that theyโ€™re very against drinking to excess.

 

6. Exhausting

Definition

Something that causes feelings of tiredness or fatigue.

Examples

โ€œHer hangover was exhausting. She couldnโ€™t even get to her feet without retching.โ€

โ€œHis exhausting hangover was impairing his vision. He needed to go home and sleep ASAP.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œExhaustingโ€ is a great adjective to use if you want to describe the physical effects of your characterโ€™s hangover. This can show their inability to deal with the illness, and it can help to further the plot after a big night of drinking. Additionally, this shows your audience the extent of their physical suffering.

 

7. Inconvenient

Definition

Something that causes difficulties or problems.

Examples

โ€œI have no time for an inconvenient hangover. Give me some orange juice, and letโ€™s get out of here.โ€

โ€œHe woke up with an inconvenient hangover, but he was able to shake off the headache and get on with his morning.โ€

How it Adds Description

If your characterโ€™s hangover isnโ€™t awful, the word โ€œinconvenientโ€ can show its smaller extent. This adjective can also show how your character isnโ€™t bothered by physical ailments, and this can even foreshadow future plot points.

 

8. Slight

Definition

Something small or insignificant.

Examples

โ€œA slight hangover was nothing for him. He was happy to get up and continue working, despite the fact he drank ten beers the night before.โ€

โ€œShe could feel a slight hangover appearing. This was just the start, and she knew sheโ€™d feel awful in a few hours.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œSlightโ€ can be used to show a hangover is small, or it can be used to show a large hangover is just beginning. If your character is robust, โ€œslightโ€ is a great word to show their indifference to feeling ill. However, โ€œslightโ€ can be used to foreshadow a big hangover for characters who are weaker or smaller.

 

9. Negligible

Definition

Something so small that itโ€™s not worth worrying about or considering.

Examples

โ€œHis hangover was negligible. No one at work even realized heโ€™d been drinking the night before.โ€

โ€œShe hoped for a negligible hangover. But her gut told her sheโ€™d be waking up with a pounding head and a nauseous stomach.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œNegligibleโ€ is an adjective used to describe things that are minor and insignificant. This can help you showcase a characterโ€™s disregard for hangovers, which therefore paints a clearer image of their overall priorities. However, you can also use the word to show how alcohol doesnโ€™t affect your character, a trait you can build on as the story continues.

 

10. Mighty

Definition

Something very powerful or large.

Examples

โ€œI can see the suffering on your face. That is one mighty hangover youโ€™ve got there.โ€

โ€œShe was humbled by the mighty hangover. This was enough sickness to make her consider sobriety.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want your hangover to have a large effect on your character, the word โ€œmightyโ€ can show the power it has over them. This adjective can help to show the hangover is a defining point for the character, and it can signal their desire to change their drinking habits after.

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