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How to Describe a Psychopath in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a psychopath in a story

Is a character in your novel a psychopath? Do you need some interesting words to describe this character? This post will help you. In it, we share examples of how to describe a psychopath in a story using 10 adjectives.

 

1. Threatening

Definition

Someone with aggressive behavior that may harm someone else.

Examples

โ€œThe policeman gulped as he locked eyes with the threatening man. His psychotic gaze was as cold as ice.โ€

โ€œThe medical team confirmed that the threatening psychopath was a danger to society.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to show that your psychopath is a dangerous character, โ€œthreateningโ€ is the word to use. This shows that the character has the potential to harm others, and thus other characters may try to hunt them down and isolate them from society. Most other characters will likely be scared of a โ€œthreateningโ€ psychopath as they donโ€™t want to be physically or mentally hurt.

 

2. Unnoticeable

Definition

Someone whoโ€™s not easily detected or seen.

Examples

โ€œOnce out of jail and in the city, the psychotic woman was unnoticeable. The authorities couldnโ€™t find him anywhere.โ€

โ€œMost people thought she was a lovely lady, but underneath her charming personality was an unnoticeable psychopath.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œUnnoticeableโ€ can be used to describe a psychopath that doesnโ€™t draw lots of attention to themselves. This could be because they hide their psychopathic tendencies or because theyโ€™re very high functioning. Other characters may never even notice their true personality throughout the novel.

 

3. Furious

Definition

Someone who is very angry.

Examples

โ€œWhenever he spoke, you could hear the rage in the furious psychopathโ€™s voice.โ€

โ€œThe police officers didnโ€™t know the psychopath was furious and that they were the target of her fury.โ€

How it Adds Description

If your psychopath has been wronged or wants to get revenge, they may be โ€œfurious.โ€ This emotion might provoke them to go on a rampage or to hurt other characters, even if they donโ€™t deserve it. A โ€œfuriousโ€ psychopath likely scares most other characters away due to their insatiable moods and unpredictable behavior.

 

4. Reserved

Definition

Someone who is quiet or keeps their emotions hidden.

Examples

โ€œUnlike the TV stereotypes of psychopaths, she was much more reserved than the jury expected.โ€

โ€œThe reserved woman sat amongst her colleagues, hiding her psychopathic nature while observing their actions.โ€

How it Adds Description

Not all psychopaths are loud and aggressive. Many are quiet and calculating, especially when watching others to try and mimic their behavior. โ€œReservedโ€ shows that your psychopath is staying quiet and hiding their true thoughts from the characters around them. This might make them more difficult to connect with, and other characters may ignore them.

 

5. Peculiar

Definition

Someone who acts in an unusual and unpleasant way.

Examples

โ€œThough he wasnโ€™t officially diagnosed as a psychopath, he knew there was something peculiar about him.โ€

โ€œThe FBI checked through their psychopath files to find the peculiar man.โ€

How it Adds Description

Sometimes psychopaths act in strange ways that stand out to the average person. If your fictional psychopath does this, they might be deemed โ€œpeculiar,โ€ and other characters may try to find them and work out why theyโ€™re behaving strangely. Their โ€œpeculiarโ€ actions may also be off-putting to others, leaving them alone in society.

 

6. Sharp

Definition

Someone whoโ€™s quick to notice and understand things.

Examples

โ€œThe escaped psychopath was sharp and realized the CIA was trailing him long before they tried to make a move.โ€

โ€œEmma has always been a sharp girl, but everyone was shocked when the doctor deemed her a psychopath.โ€

How it Adds Description

Many psychopaths are very intelligent, and you can show your reader that your character is clever by using the word โ€œsharp.โ€ This adjective also hints that they notice things quickly, and this could help them when trying to outsmart others or get their own way.

 

7. Deceitful

Definition

Someone who is dishonest and tricks others.

Examples

โ€œHe was a charming man, but none of the ladies he swooned knew that he was a deceitful psychopath โ€” his looks clouded their vision every time.โ€

โ€œThe lady didnโ€™t even realize her actions were deceitful. It was just how she journeyed through life as a psychopath.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œDeceitfulโ€ is perfect to describe a psychopathic character who takes advantage of others and lies frequently. This will make them very hard to trust, especially if theyโ€™re the narrator of your story. Many characters wonโ€™t notice their lies, as โ€œdeceitfulโ€ psychopaths are very good at hiding their true intentions.

 

8. Frightening

Definition

Something or someone that makes you feel anxious and afraid.

Examples

โ€œThere was nothing more frightening than a psychopath with a motive.โ€

โ€œJenny knew her best friend was a psychopath, but unlike most people, she didnโ€™t find him frightening. In fact, she was fascinated by his mind.โ€

How it Adds Description

If your psychopath displays aggressive or unpredictable behavior, many other characters may find them โ€œfrightening.โ€ This shows theyโ€™re no longer hiding their psychopathic traits and that other people have noticed their behavior is scary.

 

9. Creepy

Definition

Someone or something that makes you feel nervous.

Examples

โ€œThe creepy man gave everyone on the train a nervous feeling. But they still didnโ€™t realize he was a dangerous psychopath.โ€

โ€œDespite the psychopathโ€™s best attempts to reign in his personality, he still appeared creepy to most people.โ€

How it Adds Description

Unlike scary or frightening, โ€œcreepyโ€ shows that the psychopath makes others feel nervous but not completely afraid. They likely notice something is off about the psychopath but canโ€™t put their finger on why. Psychopaths who are โ€œcreepyโ€ are likely showing common symptoms, such as the tendency to lie or disregard other charactersโ€™ rights.

 

10. Infuriating

Definition

Someone that is very annoying.

Examples

โ€œIโ€™ve had it with that infuriating man! Something needs to be done โ€” we canโ€™t have a psychopath in our town any longer.โ€

โ€œThe infuriating woman showed no remorse for her actions in court. However, this was common behavior for someone with psychotic tendencies.โ€

How it Adds Description

If a psychopath is โ€œinfuriating,โ€ it hints that other characters are getting fed up with their actions. Characters who are trying to stop them or arrest them may call them โ€œinfuriating,โ€ especially if theyโ€™ve just escaped or evaded police custody.

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