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How to Describe a Witch in a Story

By Isobel Coughlan

how to describe a witch in a story

Are you writing a novel about witches? If you need some help, weโ€™ve put together a list of descriptive words you can use in your writing below. Scroll down to learn how to describe a witch in a story.

 

1. Grumpy

Definition

Someone thatโ€™s miserable or bad-tempered.

Examples

โ€œThe grumpy witch sat on her stool and pondered all that was bad in the world.โ€

โ€œThough the witch had received an apology from the fearful townspeople, she still felt grumpy about their scornful actions.โ€

How it Adds Description

You can show the witch is ill-tempered via the adjective โ€œgrumpy.โ€ This shows that sheโ€™s either always in a bad mood or something has happened to lower her spirits. Being โ€œgrumpyโ€ will likely make the witch an unpopular person, as she wonโ€™t be positive about anything. Other characters may even avoid the witch when sheโ€™s in a โ€œgrumpyโ€ mood, leaving her isolated and even grumpier.

 

2. Compassionate

Definition

Someone who shows understanding or pity for those who are suffering.

Examples

โ€œMany people were scared of the witch, but they didnโ€™t know her true compassionate nature. She wouldnโ€™t even harm a fly.โ€

โ€œThe compassionate witch took the injured cat into her home and used her magic to nurse it back to health.โ€

How it Adds Description

The word โ€œcompassionateโ€ signals that the witch is kind-hearted and sympathetic to those around her, making her an overall pleasant person. Some characters may misjudge her based on typical witch stereotypes, and they might feel bad when they realize sheโ€™s โ€œcompassionateโ€ and caring.

 

3. Cunning

Definition

Someone who achieves things in a clever way, and often by deceit.

Examples

โ€œNo one suspected that the car crash was the witchโ€™s fault. Once again, her cunning nature had allowed her to get away with her crimes.โ€

โ€œThe witch thought of herself as cunning and witty, but her friends saw through her act.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œCunningโ€ can be used to describe a witch thatโ€™s clever but uses her intelligence to deceive others and craft intricate plans. This is a trait associated with people who are very intellectually sharp or people who trick others frequently, and their talents might draw other characters towards them for help or to achieve their goals.

 

4. Foolish

Definition

Someone who isnโ€™t sensible and lacks common sense.

Examples

โ€œThe witch felt foolish after she realized she bought the wrong ingredients for the spell.โ€

โ€œOnly foolish witches use eye of newt! Everyone knows the ingredients are toe of frog and wool of bat.โ€

How it Adds Description

While many think witches are clever, they also sometimes have rash moments and can exhibit โ€œfoolishโ€ behavior. โ€œFoolishโ€ shows that your witch has had a slip of judgment, which may lead to problems further down the line in the novel. Additionally, nasty characters may try to take advantage of a โ€œfoolishโ€ witch, as she might be easier to deceive.

 

5. Scrawny

Definition

Someone who is very thin, bony, and unattractive.

Examples

โ€œThe little boy yelped when he caught a glimpse of the scrawny witch. Her hair was ragged, and her face was covered in deep-set wrinkles.โ€

โ€œDespite her scrawny and unkempt appearance, the witch was one of the most influential of the coven.โ€

How it Adds Description

Typically, witches are considered to be haggard and unkempt looking. If youโ€™re trying to show your witch has a run-down appearance, โ€œscrawnyโ€ is an excellent word to use. This gives the reader a clear visual while showing that the character doesnโ€™t care about keeping up her appearance. This could be because sheโ€™s more focused on her magic or simply doesnโ€™t want to adhere to strict beauty standards.

 

6. Seductive

Definition

Someone who is very attractive or can make you do something against your will.

Examples

โ€œThe seductive witch used her beauty and powers to attract her victims.โ€

โ€œUnlike the others, the young witch was seductive and took pleasure in toying with the local gentlemen.โ€

How it Adds Description

While there are clear stereotypes about witches being unattractive, โ€œseductiveโ€ can be used to describe a witch who is beautiful and attracts admirers. If wicked, the witch could use her โ€œseductiveโ€ qualities to use the admirers in her magical plans. Alternatively, some witches may not enjoy being โ€œseductiveโ€ as it draws too much attention to them.

 

7. Powerful

Definition

Someone who can influence or control people and events.

Examples

โ€œThe high priestess witch was the most powerful the coven had ever seen.โ€

โ€œDespite her lack of experience, Anna was a naturally powerful witch.โ€

How it Adds Description

If you want to show a witchโ€™s influence or command over events, โ€œpowerfulโ€ will help. This adjective portrays the witch as an impressive character, and many lesser witches may look to her for advice or respect her abilities.

 

8. Villainous

Definition

Someone willing to break the law or harm others to get what they want.

Examples

โ€œHer villainous mother was a witch, and she tried to spend as much time away from her as possible.โ€

โ€œThe local witch was villainous, and she constantly tried to harm the local residents with magical potions.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œVillainousโ€ portrays the witch as a bad person, so consider this adjective if the witch is the villain of your story. Most characters will dislike the โ€œvillainousโ€ witch, as she doesnโ€™t care about other people’s feelings and actively tries to hurt them. This will likely make her an outcast.

 

9. Intimidating

Definition

Someone thatโ€™s frightening and makes others lose confidence.

Examples

โ€œThe girl looked into the intimidating witchโ€™s eyes and shuddered.โ€

โ€œEven the king felt insecure in the presence of the intimidating witch.โ€

How it Adds Description

You can explore your witch’s power and her effect on others via โ€œintimidating.โ€ This adjective shows that others find her scary and may also feel self-conscious or timid in her presence. Only confident characters will be able to stand up to an โ€œintimidatingโ€ witch.

 

10. Studious

Definition

Someone who spends lots of time studying.

Examples

โ€œUnlike the other teen witches, Sabrina was studious and preferred to study the history of spells and potions.โ€

โ€œThe Hogwarts library is a dream come true for studious witches.โ€

How it Adds Description

โ€œStudiousโ€ can be used to show your fictional witch is either interested in studying, reading, or academia in general. This also implies that she has a dedicated personality, as studying takes a lot of effort and organization. Other witches may be jealous of this trait, especially if the witch receives higher grades or more praise for her work.

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