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Reviewed by Debs Carr
Eleanor Gill is an only child living with her silent, emotionally crippled father, who has been permanently damaged by his years in a Japanese POW camp and her mother, exhausted and miserable, struggling to cope with her rundown farm on a Pennine hillside. They have no money to spare, so when Eleanor is encouraged by her teacher to sign up for a French school exchange trip she doesn’t expect to be able to go. Her father has other ideas and so, thanks to his hidden savings, Eleanor embarks on a journey that introduces her to experiences certain to alter her emotionally forever.
Etienne Martin’s family farm in the picturesque Loire Valley with the river running through it, the vineyard on the hill, and the heat of the French summer is the antithesis of her home life. However, anger, misery and tension are also at the centre of this bitter family. Etienne’s wife, Mathilde and her sullen son Jean Paul, make no attempt to hide their contempt of Eleanor and it’s only when she slowly gets to know Grandmére, the little girl Lisette, and Etienne that Eleanor begins to think that maybe she can cope with her stay in France after all.
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The tension begins building slowly, speeding up as the layers unfold culminating in the emotional, dramatic climax. The picturesque countryside is woven so perfectly into the story that I could almost taste the grapes. This was an evocative, beautifully depicted tale and I look forward to reading more by this author.
9/10